Friday, August 19, 2011

Clear As Glass


           Birds have excellent eyesight; it’s their dominant sense. From great distances, they can spot fish swimming in water, mice burrowing through leaves, worms wiggling in the soil, and moths flitting through vegetation. Some birds of prey can even see a small rodent as far as five miles away.
            But birds cannot see glass. 
            In the United States alone, almost a billion birds die each when they collide with windows. Even when birds survive a collision and are merely stunned, they usually fall victim to predators such as cats, dogs, and raccoons before they recover.
            When glass is clear, birds see what is reflected on the glass, which is usually a backyard landscape. Here are a few simple measures to prevent birds from flying into your picture window.
1.  Adhesive film applied to the outside of your window cuts down on reflections, at the same time allowing ample light to shine through.
2.  Place bird feeder or birdbaths away from windows.
3.  Hang stripes of yard, ribbon, aluminum silhouettes of hawks, all of which move, in front of windows. Pasting decals on the glass does not help.
4.  Look into installing patterned glass, such as frosted or etched glass, which is visible to birds.
5.  Hang plants or wind chimes near windows. They provide movement, which breaks up the reflection.
6.  Installing an awning provides a shadow and reduces glare.
7.  Adding outside screens cuts down on the reflection as well.
            For more information, logon to www.abcbirds.org 

Monday, August 15, 2011

Do You Critique for Free?


My article is the last stop on the Rolling Mystery Blog Tour. Here are the other bloggers who participated in this roll. If you haven’t already visited their sites, please stop by and have a look. If you like what they’ve written, please leave a comment.


Critiquing: A Two-Way Street
            The subject we are addressing today is: do you critique for free? If you are in the business of editing, of course you would charge to critique a writer’s work. But if you’re a writer, especially a one who is just starting out, having your work critiqued by other writers is extremely valuable in helping you learn and grow as a writer.
            Paying someone to critique your work can be expensive. Also, you receive the assistance and opinion of only ONE writer. If you join a writer’s critique group, however, not only do you get the advantage of several folks reading your work, you also get to read theirs. For me, editing someone’s work helps me hone my craft.
            Finding the right critique group is not an easy task, though. You have to find one that works, one whose members are serious about writing and who know the difference between constructive criticism and subjective judgment. I tried on two different groups before I found one that fit. The first group I joined couldn’t agree when and where to meet, much less how we would provide feedback. One member, who opposed every suggestion, came to the second meeting, wearing dark glasses and a sport coat with elbow patches. The jacket pocket held a pipe. He sat down at the table, crossed his arms, glared at the rest of us, and didn’t utter a single word. I left that meeting looking over my shoulder for the next few days. Another group was dominated by an elderly woman who fussed at the rest of us for misplaces commas and semicolons.           
            I finally found a group I felt comfortable, and we’ve been working together for more than eight years. We write different genres: non-fiction, sci-fi, mystery, screenplays, stage plays, short stories, and poetry. Over the years we’ve all improved and supported one another along the way.
            Money doesn’t exchange hands, but we’ve grown richer by reading and critiquing one another’s work. If someone outside my writer’s circle, wanted to pay me for critiquing their writing, I say, “Absolutely,” and you can make the check out to Kathleen Kaska.

            Our next blog is scheduled for Wednesday, August 17 and our topic is Red Herrings.